Square D does allow two wires to a breaker in both QO and Home Line.
But what Square D doesn't allow is the jumper bar between the two neutral bars to be removed, this is a 110.3 violation, as that is why the bonding screw is located in the middle of it, your supposed to install the proper grounding bars. ITE, and a few other manufactures do allow the jumper bar to be removed, but not Square D, and the fact there not easy to remove.
The 1/2" conduit doesn't have two hots and a ground, it has a orange neutral and a red hot, and a ground.
I would also make sure the added copper EGC does in fact run to the service and is not there just for show.
Also without a bond from the EGC bar to the panel box, any fault to this case will not have a fault current path and can be at 120 volts to earth if a hot was to make contact with it.
The rest was covered above by others, like the missing bushing on the feeder conduit.
I would put top priority on this as this is for outlets by water, very dangerous location.
If I was the inspector it would be shut down as a life safety hazard, till fixed.