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I'm looking for constructive criticism on the following, and if you think it is merited, support in the form of comments from you on 12-15a. Thanks, Jim Williams
4 Comment:
Informational Note No. 1: The motor controller, motion controller, and operation controller are located in a single enclosure or a combination of enclosures. [ROP 12?15a]
Informational Note No. 2: Informational Note Figure 620.2 is for information only.[ROP 12?15a]
5 Statement of Problem and Substantiation.
If the reader doesn't understand that Informational Note Figure 620.2 is informational only, then how does this Informational Note help?
4 Comment:
Informational Note No. 1: The motor controller, motion controller, and operation controller are located in a single enclosure or a combination of enclosures. [ROP 12?15a]
Informational Note No. 2: Informational Note Figure 620.2 is for information only.[ROP 12?15a]
5 Statement of Problem and Substantiation.
If the reader doesn't understand that Informational Note Figure 620.2 is informational only, then how does this Informational Note help?