Check out the specs for the breaker. I don't know of any household breaker that is listed for wire smaller than #14.
If I were an inspector, that is what I would be the most concerned with. I would not allow a #18 on a breaker unless the breaker stated it was designed to accommodate such a small conductor.
Another concern is the location of the device. What are the requirements for placing devices inside service panels? Are you sure there is adequate room to still maintain the fill requirements after the device is installed? Have you ever noticed that whole house surge protectors are designed to be on the outside of the panel? Methinks this should be as well, but it is not. Now you have to make some calculations and count lots of wires. Good luck.
I note that the CTs are on the line side of the main breaker. Are you installing them with the meter in place? If so, that constitutes live work in my book. Also, max PPE. What if one of the feeders popped loose and grounded out while you were putting a CT on? Do you have any idea of the arc flash that will be produced? It is not uncommon for line side conductors to be protected at thousands of amps.
My vote is two thumbs down for this one.