I'm confused too. If I am seeing this right, the 'service point' (as defined in 100) is simply where the NEC begins governing the installation, and it's been said to be at the pole with the metering. No disconnects yet.
Then you will have one mast with two sets of SE conductors, running through an exisiting service panelboard into two other panelboards. Then, the two sets are disconnected and still grouped, and still outside. All three service disconnects.
I believe the biggest question mark is the two sets in the same mast, which is permitted by 230.42 exception 2.
If it is as I'm picturing it, I don't see anything wrong with the installation so far.
I've heard some say that having service conductors routed through the 1st disconnect into the others would be a violation of 230.7, since the panel is being used as a raceway - but I don't buy it. Service conductors can't very well be kept
out of a service disconnect, can they?
If you want, here's a related thread I started on
temps awhile back, it's semi-related. Mostly, I put a link in to be honest, that I've had an axe to grind on this (230.7) in the past. While the two installations are different, it might help you in some way, so there it is.