Not sure I agree.
First, the conductor in question appears to be an EGC, not a GEC, attached to the main enclosure, instead of to an electrode.
If so, and seeing the neutral/ground bond in the main enclosure, the conductor should not be there, as it parallels the neutral.
The neutral is bonded in the alarm switch, which is where the alarm GEC system starts, as does the building system in the main.
Now, if the alarm switch needs its own GEC, which will land where the main GEC does, there will be an unavoidable parallel.
It might be better to eliminate the bond in the alarm switch, if it's permissible to wire the alarm switch as we would a sub-panel.