This is kind of a funny post because everyone always gets confused about fire pumps. It seems like you could have installed 100 of them but would still need to re-read the code to make sure its correct. I think this diagram is fine. The only criticism is that 1000A is too big for the LRA, the breaker has dials on it so it could be dialed down to 900A, which is the correct amperage (which wouldn't matter since no controller will allow a pump to hit LRA anyway). Also the Jockey pump doesn't need to be sized to its LRA, per NEC.
I don't see a big difference by swapping the design with a 208v motor, if the motor were 208, then the LRA would more than double, which would require a service near 1000A anyways, so basically the added cost here is a 75kva transformer.
Ideally the utility would run straight to a 208V fire pump controller after the CT cabinet, the controller is listed for use as a service, and the code permits it, but many utilities won't allow it since they want a disconnect within site of their meter.