Not sure that the rules had been changed so that it allows you to make the bonding in both the ED and a separate Service Equipment on the load side of the ED.
There's two different types of bonding we are now discussing: (1) bonding a piece of equipment not on the load side of the service disconnect to the service grounded conductor to provide a fault clearing path, and (2) installing a main bonding jumper which serves as the origination point of an EGC system, and for which downstream (away from the utility) the EGC and the grounded conductor are always kept separate.
(1) must be done in every piece of equipment not downstream of the service disconnect. (2) may only be done in the service disconnect itself and must be done there.
A green screw can serve either purpose; for equipment upstream of the service disconnect, such as some emergency disconnects, it is only serving the purpose (1).
And BTW, the portions of 230.85(B) which you highlighted are in my mind totally misguided. They are based on a linguistic conflict that is not a technical conflict. In order to get around the idea that the service disconnect is supposed to be the upstream-most OCPD, but to facilitate retrofit of an exterior emergency disconnect on a residence where the existing service disconnect is inside, the writers of 230.85 invented this magic label of "not service equipment."
The wording of that conflicts with the pre-existing wording from UL 67 (IIRC) that "suitable for use as service equipment" means "provisions present for bonding the grounded conductor to the case, or not" (along with a loose sticker that says "service disconnect") and "suitable for use only as service equipment" means "the terminal intended for the grounded conductor is permanently bonded to the case" (along with a permanent label of "service disconnect").
If the UL terms had been, say, "bondable grounded conductor" and "permanently bonded grounded conductor," instead of SUSE and SOUSE, there there would have been no linguistic conflict. Or more appropriately, since the UL terms came first, if the writers of 230.85 had come up with a different wording for their magic label, e.g. "Not Primary Service Disconnect," there would have been no linguistic conflict. And the sections of 230.85 you highlighted would not be there.
The upshot is that the highlighted prohibitions are stupid, and that safety wise there is no reason not to ignore them and just cover up any permanent "Service Disconnect" labels on SOUSE equipment with the required "Emergency Disconnect, Not Service Equipment" label.
Cheers, Wayne