Re: Big oops ... need suggestions
Originally posted by al hildenbrand:The key thing that I read is the lack of a separator between "wiring" and "together". "Together" ties the list "hardware, fittings and wiring devices" to the previous phrase, to "wiring", as you say.
Just to be clear, I perceive you are talking about the absence of a comma between the words "and signal circuit wiring" and the words "together with." I also perceive that you interpret the absence of a comma as a deliberate intent to connect the four items (power wiring, lighting wiring, control wiring, and signal circuit wiring) to the three things (hardware, fittings, and wiring devices).
I disagree with that interpretation. There is no comma at that location because the author violated the rules of grammar. The words "together with" constitute a "conjunctive adverb" that begin the adverbial phrase "together with all their associated hardware. . . ." In accordance with Kate Turabian's "A Manual for Writers," a well-respected resource (I know that because my wife, the English Major and Professional Librarian, made me buy a copy), that situation requires a comma just before the conjunction.
But let's leave bad grammar out of the discussion. It says what it says. At the bottom of this page, I will show that the presence or absence of that comma does not change my argument.
So let's turn instead to your Venn Diagram. You never explained what your "stuff A" and "stuff B" were. So I don't quite follow your point. Let me try, and I'll try to be explicitly clear about what goes into what area within the Venn Diagram.
Originally posted by al hildenbrand: Premises Wiring (System) is the complete set. The set is broken into two parts: Interior and Exterior. Interior and Exterior added together equal the complete set.
No. There are three parts, and the three parts added together equal the complete set. Draw a Venn Diagram with three circles that have no common area (i.e., are mutually exclusive). </font>
- <font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Interior wiring is one part. Label one circle in the Venn Diagram to represent interior wiring.</font>
- <font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Exterior wiring is a second part. Label a second circle in the Venn Diagram to represent exterior wiring.</font>
- <font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">I'll give you the label for the third circle in a moment.</font>
<font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Divide the circle called "Interior Wiring" into four pieces. Label those four pieces "power" and "lighting" and "control" and "signal." Those four smaller pieces add up to give you the entire set of "Interior Wiring." There is nothing within "Interior Wiring" that does not fall into one, and only one, of those four pieces.
Divide the circle called "Exterior Wiring" into four pieces. Label those four pieces "power" and "lighting" and "control" and "signal." Those four smaller pieces add up to give you the entire set of "Exterior Wiring." There is nothing within "Exterior Wiring" that does not fall into one, and only one, of those four pieces.
Now let us label the third circle. Call it "Associated Stuff." Divide this third circle into three pieces.
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- <font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Label one piece, "Hardware Associated with the Internal and Exterior Wiring."</font>
- <font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Label the second piece, "Fittings Associated with the Internal and Exterior Wiring."</font>
- <font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Label the third piece, "Wiring Devices Associated with the Internal and Exterior Wiring."</font>
<font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">There is nothing within "Associated Stuff" that does not fall into one, and only one, of these three pieces.
In summary, the Premises Wiring System is comprised of three things:
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- <font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Interior wiring, comprising power, lighting, control, and signal wiring, all of which is "wires,"</font>
- <font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Exterior wiring, comprising power, lighting, control, and signal wiring, all of which is "wires," and</font>
- <font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Hardware, fittings, and wiring devices, none of which is "wires."</font>
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Originally posted by al hildenbrand: "Such wiring" of the second sentence refers to "That interior and exterior wiring".
I agree. And in doing so, it is not referring back to the associated hardware, fittings, or wiring devices. It is referring back to wires, just to wires.
One more final point, as I promised above.
Why does the presence of absence of a comma not matter? The three things (hardware, fittings, and wiring devices) can be interpreted as being "associated with" the original words "interior and exterior wiring," as I believe. Those three things can be associated with the four things (power wiring, lighting wiring, control wiring, and signal circuit wiring), as you have said. But "Interior and Exterior Wiring," as a set of two things, is
exactly identical to the set of "power, lighting, control, and signal circuit wiring," as can be seen from the Venn Diagram I describe above. So that grammar error does not change the meaning of the sentence.